Looking at both Andrew and Emily's Blogs i've been able to see two new ways of posting on my blog.

From looking at the two blogs i have seen what level i should be working at and have seen that the language i'm using is not technical enough.


http://andrewjohnsona2media.blogspot.com/2010/01/codes-and-conventions-of-short-film.html
^Andrew Johnson
I love the way his language engages the reader.
Looking at Andrew's blog i see that he has blogged every detail in a post, but he has also joined two or three examples of the same topic in one post.

http://andrewjohnsona2media.blogspot.com/2010/03/film-review-page-idea-no1.html
^This post of Andrews film review page ideas i feel will be of use to me, when i come to my film review designing. These posts were often short and sharp to show the process that he's going through. I think in some of the posts he could of gone into a bit more detail for instance of the linked post i believe he could of gone into why he used those screenshots, what was relevant about them.

http://emilyjeanprescott.blogspot.com/2010/02/album-covers.html
^Emily Jean Prescott
This post i believe will help me in my research despite it being about music and mine short film i believe it will help me as she talks about her band and their message and i think i can use that to get the style i need for my short film. The detail of the post i believe is something i can take on board and make my posts more detailed for the reader/s.