Looking at my Animatic I can see there are some areas I need to work on…
-Sound usage
The sound in my Animatic was very Flat line and came completely from the video itself, I did have a soundtrack to go with the piece which I placed into the video however I think I may of done this wrong so is why the soundtrack did not play.
-Camera Steadiness
During the Animatic due to it being a filmed version it has made me aware of some issues I have with steadiness, this is very evident in the animatic as there are many shots which are ruined by my unsteadiness.
-Transitions
The majority of the animatic is very roughly edited, I think that I shall add in some transitions to make it the audience viewing smoother and feel less jumpy.
-Lighting
Lighting was problem the biggest problem I faced as the lighting fluctuates throughout the piece, to overcome this I shall bring in more artificial light onto the set as I think this will help the overall piece.
-Camera Shots
I think the use of shots in my piece do work well and show a varied outlook on the focus. I do feel however that I need to choose more rooted shots such as a mid-shot capturing the action of the cakes being made or a full body long shot of her preparing the food.
Overall
Watching the Animatic has also given me new ideas as to what I could insert into my film such as the aforementioned mid and long shots and also a few new ideas for the parody version of Nigella Lawson, such as wasting food (meaningless chopping), disgusting food.
I also see that there is a complete lack of an intro; I have a few ideas for the intro which I shall make a separate post about.
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